Thursday, July 11, 2013


There was a girl named Nicks. Nicks is a lonely girl and she never talked to anyone else. Nobody tried to talk to her too because she looks mysterious and creepy. As she was walking, a girl approached her and asked if they could be friends. The girl's name was Max. Nicks was overwhelm in what she heard. She never thought that someone would like to be her friend. That day, Nicks and Max became best friends. They were always together like sisters. Nothing else could keep themselves apart. One day, Nicks and Max were on a date and Max's brother came along with them. The name of Max's brother is Brent. Nicks and Brent had many things they like in common which made them much closer to each other. The three became best friends. Until one day, Brent told his sister that he has feelings for Nicks and he is ready to tell it to her. Max was happy with it. The following day, Brent told everything to Nicks and fortunately it was alright with Nicks because she also has feelings for Brent. Everyone was happy, Nicks and Brent has a happy relationship and Max was always there supporting her brother and her best friend....

24 comments:

  1. You have some flaws in your grammar. Huwahuwahuwa

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  2. There are some grammatical errors, but the story is nice. (:

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  3. the story is nice! Keep it up! ;D

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